Good catch, I never realized I didn't properly describe him, though I sometimes I tend to shy away from block paragraphs of character description...
I can definitely add in some Hibernian plains descriptions. :)
And I should have been more clear that Aedan's hut is close to the carving site, so Cormac could carry him there, but not back Cormac's hut where Aedan had been living so he didn't have to go back to his own hut.
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Date: 2016-09-28 05:39 pm (UTC)I can definitely add in some Hibernian plains descriptions. :)
And I should have been more clear that Aedan's hut is close to the carving site, so Cormac could carry him there, but not back Cormac's hut where Aedan had been living so he didn't have to go back to his own hut.
Thanks so much for critiquing! :D